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Monday, November 17, 2025

Corroborating Joseph’s production of D&C 132

Note: I updated this post at the end of section 1. B.

The 2025 Come Follow Me lessons covered D&C 132 recently. This has long been a controversial section, in large part because it was never published, or even made public, during Joseph Smith's lifetime. It also contradicted the statement on marriage that was included in the Doctrine and Covenants as section 101.

https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/doctrine-and-covenants-1835/259

The historical evidence surrounding D&C 132 is ambiguous enough to support a range of interpretations, which is why, 180 years after the Nauvoo period, people still disagree about whether Joseph Smith produced the revelation. As usual, all sides claim the evidence supports their respective interpretations.

Plenty has been written about D&C 132, but two elements of the text that shed some light on the topic deserve more attention.

1. Joseph's ability to recite from memory.

2. The influence of Jonathan Edwards.

1. Joseph's memory.

The historical record includes the journal of William Clayton, which includes this entry for 12 July 1843:

This A. M. I wrote a Revelation consisting of 10 pages on the order of the priesthood, showing the designs in Moses, Abraham, David and Solomon having many wives and concubines &c. After it was wrote Prests. Joseph & Hyrum presented it and read it to E[mma] who said she did not believe a word of it and appeared very rebellious.

Not available in the Church History Catalog, but a transcript is available here: https://mormonpolygamydocuments.org/master-index/ Document JS0003.

The term “designs” does not appear in the document we have today, but “wives and concubines” does. We can infer either that (i) “designs” was Clayton’s own characterization of what Joseph dictated, or (ii) Joseph used the term to introduce or explain the revelation “off the record” so to speak.

(As an aside, “design” and “designs” are common non-biblical term that appear in the Book of Mormon, Doctrine and Covenants, and Pearl of Great Price. I’ve shown that it is also a common term used by Jonathan Edwards (see below). And it also appears in one of the randomly selected Jonathan Edwards quotations in my annotation of D&C 132. The phrase “wives and concubines” is another non-biblical Edwardsian term.)

In 1871, Clayton wrote a letter to Madison M. Scott. 

I did write the Revelation on Celestial marriage given through the Prophet Joseph Smith on 12th of July 1843. When the revelation was written there was no one present except the Prophet Joseph, his brother Hyrum and myself. It was written in the small office upstairs in the rear of the brick store which stood on the banks of the Mississippi river. It took some three hours to write it. Joseph dictated sentence by sentence and I wrote it as he dictated. After the whole was written Joseph requested me to read it slowly and carefully, which I did, and he then pronounced it correct. The same night a copy was taken by Bishop Whitney, which copy is now here, and which I know and testify is correct.

https://catalog.churchofjesuschrist.org/assets/ab830b42-45c7-4c77-b32f-b1a1d76dfdfd/0/3

This three-hour dictation session is a prime example of Joseph’s ability to recite from memory. We infer that Clayton recorded the revelation verbatim, and there is evidence that this is the case (see below), but it is possible there were breaks and/or conversations during the dictation.

Clayton later attested that the Whitney copy is correct, but he did so 38 years after he recorded Joseph’s dictation and it is implausible that Clayton would recall whether the copy was word perfect.

Three years after he wrote to Scott, Clayton added this detail:

[Joseph] requested me to get paper and prepare to write. Hyrum very urgently requested Joseph to write the revelation by means of the Urim and Thummim but Joseph, in reply, said he did not need to, for he knew the revelation perfectly from beginning to end.

https://catalog.churchofjesuschrist.org/assets/d091310b-4d88-43dd-a141-bb7ec1579934/0/2

We assume that in 1843, Joseph did not have the original Urim and Thummim that came with the plates, which means that Hyrum would have been referring to what we now call Joseph’s “seer stone.” Clayton’s 1874 statement is cited by SITH proponents to support their theory that Joseph also translated the Book of Mormon with a seer stone (or “peep stone” as Mormonism Unvailed described it). We also recognize that by 1843, Joseph was teaching about the Urim and Thummim in a more general sense (i.e., D&C 130), which explains why, when he discussed the translation of the Book of Mormon (e.g., in the 842 Wentworth letter), he explained he translated with the Urim and Thummim that came with the plates. 

Hyrum’s urgent request corroborates what Zenas Gurley said about the seer stone; i.e., that Joseph used it only to “satisfy the awful curiosity” of his audience. Joseph did not need it, but his audience did. In my view, this explains the demonstration described by David Whitmer, as discussed in By Means of the Urim and Thummim: Restoring Translation to the Restoration.

The key point for present purposes is that Joseph claimed he knew the revelation “perfectly” so he could dictate it from memory. 

Some aberrations in D&C 132 support Clayton's claim that Joseph did dictate it from memory. There are passages that have slight changes from the King James Bible and Book of Mormon that are characteristic of memory errors. 

I've previously proposed that Joseph dictated much of the Isaiah chapters in 2 Nephi from memory, due partly to similar recitation anomalies.  See A Man that Can Translate.

A. The first example is verse 13, which invokes a well-known scriptural phrase: "thrones, or dominions, or principalities, or powers" (Colossians 1:16)

But verse 13 omits "dominions" here:

13 And everything that is in the world , whether it be ordained of men, by thrones, or principalities, or powers , or things of name, whatsoever they may be, that are not by me or by my word, saith the Lord, shall be thrown down

That omission does not create a doctrinal issue, but instead it suggests a memory error. Later, the revelation picks up the missing "dominions," albeit in a different word order, and adds "kingdoms."

thrones, kingdoms, principalities, and powers, dominions

(Doctrine and Covenants 132:19)

These two passages corroborate Clayton’s claim that Joseph was reciting from memory, not from a prepared text.

B. A second example, verse 25, inverts phrases from Matthew and 3 Nephi.

25 Broad is the gate , and wide the way  that leadeth to the deaths; and many there are that go in thereat , because they receive me not, neither do they abide in my law.

Notice the difference from Matthew and 3 Nephi.

“13 ¶ Enter ye in at the strait gate: for wide is the gate, and broad is the way, that leadeth to destruction, and many there be which go in thereat: (Matthew 7:13)

The first change—the different applications of "broad gate vs. wide gate" and "wide way vs. broad way"—does not change the doctrinal point, because “broad” and “wide” are roughly synonymous. But the change suggests Joseph's recollection simply switched the terms, further corroborating Clayton’s claim.

The second change, changing the KJV "many there be which" to the more colloquial "many there are that," shows that Joseph's memory retained the gist of the passage correctly but substituted plainer language.

This is similar to the way Joseph combined or blended passages in his journal entry regarding his meeting with Robert Matthews. He wrote:

ask and you shall recieve knock and it shall be opened seek and you shall find and again, if any man lack wisdom let him ask of God who giveth to all men liberally and upbra[i]deth not

https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/conversations-with-robert-matthews-9-11-november-1835/2

This part is from John: “ask, and ye shall receive” (John 16:24), which is also in D&C 4 “Ask, and ye shall receive; knock, and it shall be opened unto you.” (Doctrine and Covenants 4:7) and 3 Nephi. “Therefore, ask, and ye shall receive; knock, and it shall be opened unto you; for he that asketh, receiveth; and unto him that knocketh, it shall be opened.” (3 Nephi 27:29)

 But “seek and you shall find” is not in those passages. For that, we look at Matthew, Luke, and 3 Nephi.  “Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened. For every one that asketh receiveth; and he that seeketh findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened. (Matthew 7:7-8)

3 Nephi varies slightly. “For every one that asketh, receiveth; and he that seeketh, findeth; and to him that knocketh, it shall be opened. (3 Nephi 14:8)

This type of blending is common in the latter-day scriptures.

And, unsurprisingly, it is also common for Jonathan Edwards, such as this example from the 1808 collection where he mixes the verses the same way Joseph did:

“God never once failed of hearing a sincere and believing prayer; and those promises for ever hold good, “Ask, and ye shall receive; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened to you: For every one that asketh, receiveth; and he that seeketh, findeth; and to him that knocketh it shall be opened.”

C. A third example is verses 36 and 37, which read, referring to Abraham, “it was accounted unto him for righteousness.”

“Accounted” is a nonbiblical term that corresponds to these passages:

31 And that was counted unto him for righteousness unto all generations for evermore.

(Psalms 106:31)

3 For what saith the scripture? Abraham believed God, and it was counted unto him for righteousness.

(Romans 4:3)

7 For behold, it is not counted unto him for righteousness.

(Moroni 7:7)

Although “accounted” is a biblical word (OT-6, NT-6 BM-2, DC-13, PGP-1, JE-100+), it is not used with “unto” in the Bible. The nonbiblical “accounted unto” appears in this frequency: BM (1) DC (4) [98 and 124] JE (1) [sermon]. Jacob 4 uses it in connection with Abraham but in a different context: “even as it was accounted unto Abraham in the wilderness to be obedient.” (Jacob 4:5) The other uses in DC and JE are unrelated to Abraham.

Substituting “accounted” for “counted” in the well-known phrase “counted unto him for righteousness” appears to be a memory error, possibly triggered by Joseph’s previous usage of the term in the Book of Mormon (assuming D&C 98 and 124 were produced after D&C 132), or his familiarity with “accounted” in other scriptural passages.

D. A fourth example is verse 30.

as touching Abraham and his seed, out of the world they should continue; both in the world and out of the world should they continue as innumerable as the stars ; or, if ye were to count the sand upon the seashore ye could not number them.

The first thing to note is the in-line correction, typical of Joseph’s dictated translations and revelations, although in this case without the “or in other words” that we often see.

out of the world they should continue; both in the world and out of the world should they continue

We can imagine Joseph dictating the first clause—out of the world they should continue—and then immediately rephrasing it to add “both in the world and…” A scribe could have interpreted that as a correction, but Clayton instead recorded it verbatim. Whether Joseph intended it to read this way is unknowable—we have other examples of Joseph not carefully reviewing material, such as the “Nephi” reference in his own history. He left plenty of “or in other words” in other passages, so he apparently felt it was useful to show multiple nuances.

The second thing to note is the mélange of other scriptural language about stars and sand. The well-known biblical promise to Abraham refers to both stars and sand.

17 That in blessing I will bless thee, and in multiplying I will multiply thy seed as the stars of the heaven, and as the sand which is upon the sea shore; and thy seed shall possess the gate of his enemies;

18 And in thy seed shall all the nations of the earth be blessed; because thou hast obeyed my voice.

(Genesis 22:17–18)

The use of sand as a metaphor for a large number appears in several verses in the Old and New Testaments.  Three passages point out that the sand cannot be numbered.

And thou saidst, I will surely do thee good, and make thy seed as the sand of the sea, which cannot be numbered for multitude.

(Genesis 32:12)

10 ¶ Yet the number of the children of Israel shall be as the sand of the sea, which cannot be measured nor numbered;

(Hosea 1:10)

12 Therefore sprang there even of one, and him as good as dead, so many as the stars of the sky in multitude, and as the sand which is by the sea shore innumerable.

(Hebrews 11:12)

The term “innumerable” appears in this frequency: OT (4) NT (3) BM (2) DC (4) PGP (1). But it is used in connection with “stars” only in D&C 76 and 132. (As an aside, Jonathan Edwards used it in similar fashion: “But in the superior heavens, the innumerable multitude of stars are all fixed immovable” and “when the innumerable stars of heaven shall come down like rain.”)

 Verse 30 includes an impossible hypothetical not found in other scriptures: "count the sand." One cannot count sand. One could count particles of sand, such as in Moses 7:30: And were it possible that man could number the particles of the earth.” Thus, a more coherent statement would have been “even if ye could count the particles of sand…”

This passage is the only place in the scriptures to use “if ye were to.” In this context, it means “if you could,” which is a phrase used twice in the Book of Mormon (and dozens of times by Edwards).  

While it is possible that Joseph intended to include the impossible premise of counting “sand” here, it is also possible that, reciting from memory, he mixed metaphors and omitted words that would make more sense, which would have been the case were he reading from a document.

2. Influence of Jonathan Edwards.

One characteristic of Joseph's translations, revelations, and personal writings is the presence of words and phrases from the King James Version of the Bible and the writings of Jonathan Edwards. I've annotated several chapters and sections, and every one of them (so far) demonstrates the same pattern.

See the collection of annotations at https://www.mobom.org/jonathan-edwards.

D&C 132 does the same. 

https://www.mobom.org/dc-kjv-and-je-dc-132

Here are some of the nonbiblical Edwardsian terms and phrases in D&C 132. Many of these are exclusive to D&C 132 (i.e., found nowhere else in restoration scripture). Obviously these terms/phrases are not unique to Edwards, but their presence here is consistent with the pattern in other latter-day scriptures that combine biblical terminology with nonbiblical terminology used by Edwards.

- know and understand

- wives and concubines

- receive and obey

- the instructions

- about to give

- must obey

- no one can

- be permitted

- the conditions

- instituted

- must and shall

- obligations

- performances

- connections

- associations

- expectations

- for time

- all eternity

- that too

- efficacy

- at your hand

- except it be by

- everything that is in

- after the resurrection

- shaken and destroyed

- angels in heaven

- to all eternity

-all eternity

-full force

- exaltation and glory

- exaltation

- continuation

- buffetings of Satan

- among other things

- retained in heaven

- endowed

- exempt

The doctrinal and historical implications of the Edwardsian language is another topic, but the presence of this terminology in D&C 132 corroborates Clayton’s claim that Joseph produced D&C 132.

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List of sand verses:

17 That in blessing I will bless thee, and in multiplying I will multiply thy seed as the stars of the heaven, and as the sand which is upon the sea shore; and thy seed shall possess the gate of his enemies;

18 And in thy seed shall all the nations of the earth be blessed; because thou hast obeyed my voice.

(Genesis 22:17–18)

And thou saidst, I will surely do thee good, and make thy seed as the sand of the sea, which cannot be numbered for multitude.

(Genesis 32:12)

4 And they went out, they and all their hosts with them, much people, even as the sand that is upon the sea shore in multitude, with horses and chariots very many.

(Joshua 11:4)

12 And the Midianites and the Amalekites and all the children of the east lay along in the valley like grasshoppers for multitude; and their camels were without number, as the sand by the sea side for multitude.

(Judges 7:12)

5 ¶ And the Philistines gathered themselves together to fight with Israel, thirty thousand chariots, and six thousand horsemen, and people as the sand which is on the sea shore in multitude:

(1 Samuel 13:5)

20 ¶ Judah and Israel were many, as the sand which is by the sea in multitude, eating and drinking, and making merry.

(1 Kings 4:20)

27 He rained flesh also upon them as dust, and feathered fowls like as the sand of the sea:

(Psalms 78:27)

22 For though thy people Israel be as the sand of the sea, yet a remnant of them shall return: the consumption decreed shall overflow with righteousness.

(Isaiah 10:22)

18 O that thou hadst hearkened to my commandments! then had thy peace been as a river, and thy righteousness as the waves of the sea:

19 Thy seed also had been as the sand, and the offspring of thy bowels like the gravel thereof; his name should not have been cut off nor destroyed from before me.

(Isaiah 48:18–19)

22 As the host of heaven cannot be numbered, neither the sand of the sea measured: so will I multiply the seed of David my servant, and the Levites that minister unto me.

(Jeremiah 33:22)

10 ¶ Yet the number of the children of Israel shall be as the sand of the sea, which cannot be measured nor numbered;

(Hosea 1:10)

27 Esaias also crieth concerning Israel, Though the number of the children of Israel be as the sand of the sea, a remnant shall be saved:

(Romans 9:27)

12 Therefore sprang there even of one, and him as good as dead, so many as the stars of the sky in multitude, and as the sand which is by the sea shore innumerable.

(Hebrews 11:12)

8 And shall go out to deceive the nations which are in the four quarters of the earth, Gog and Magog, to gather them together to battle: the number of whom is as the sand of the sea.

(Revelation 20:8)

And I looked and beheld the land of promise; and I beheld multitudes of people, yea, even as it were in number as many as the sand of the sea.

(1 Nephi 12:1)

22 For though thy people Israel be as the sand of the sea, yet a remnant of them shall return; the consumption decreed shall overflow with righteousness.

(2 Nephi 20:22)

 

7 The whole face of the land had become covered with buildings, and the people were as numerous almost, as it were the sand of the sea.

(Mormon 1:7)

109 But behold, and lo, we saw the glory and the inhabitants of the telestial world, that they were as innumerable as the stars in the firmament of heaven, or as the sand upon the seashore;

(Doctrine and Covenants 76:109)

30 Abraham received promises concerning his seed, and of the fruit of his loins—from whose loins ye are, namely, my servant Joseph—which were to continue so long as they were in the world; and as touching Abraham and his seed, out of the world they should continue; both in the world and out of the world should they continue as innumerable as the stars; or, if ye were to count the sand upon the seashore ye could not number them.

(Doctrine and Covenants 132:30)

28 And he beheld also the inhabitants thereof, and there was not a soul which he beheld not; and he discerned them by the Spirit of God; and their numbers were great, even numberless as the sand upon the sea shore.

(Moses 1:28)

14 And it was in the night time when the Lord spake these words unto me: I will multiply thee, and thy seed after thee, like unto these; and if thou canst count the number of sands, so shall be the number of thy seeds.

(Abraham 3:14)

But in the superior heavens, the innumerable multitude of stars are all fixed immovable, and shine with a vastly superior brightness, and without waxing or waning, or eclipses, representing the durableness and brightness of the glory of the highest heavens as a kingdom that cannot be moved

What a storm of fire and brimstone will this be, when the innumerable stars of heaven shall come down like rain, and in which, instead of drops, there shall be those huge globes of fire

 

 

 

 

 

 


Monday, November 10, 2025

Correcting errors - 2 John

One of the challenges for those of us who study and write about Church history is the way certain narratives become a "consensus" view that becomes quasi-canonical among scholars. This is a common problem in academia generally, of course, but it can be overcome when scholars have a commitment to the pursuit of clarity, charity and understanding.

An outstanding example of this was described in an article in the Deseret News. A BYU professor discovered a significant error in translations of the Bible that was perpetuated for centuries.  

A BYU researcher has conclusively recovered the name of the woman who received the New Testament letter known as 2 John, according to a new book.

Meet Electa, an early Christian woman whose identity was concealed for nearly 2,000 years due to corrupted Greek texts and centuries of New Testament commentaries that mistakenly believed the original writer called her only “an elect lady.”

Her name has been considered a mystery because scribes copying original Greek texts accidentally dropped two letters, says Lincoln Blumell, associate dean of research in the BYU Department of Ancient Scripture.

Part of the problem was that every study of the past 150 years universally accepted the mistake without questioning the manuscript texts. (emphasis added)

Everyone should read the full article.

https://www.deseret.com/education/2025/11/08/stunning-find-meet-the-missing-woman-in-the-bible-rediscovered-by-a-byu-researcher/

We can learn several lessons from this example. One was explained in the article.

The lesson is that scholars should avoid repeating what others write without testing it, Blumell said.

Another lesson is the value of reassessing the evidence behind long-held beliefs and narratives.

The article pointed out how this error had led to speculation.

Whatever the cause, scribes copied the mistake again and again, and Electa’s identity was lost for hundreds of years.

In fact, the mistake is perpetuated today in the standard text in the field, Nestle-Aland’s 28th Edition of the Greek New Testament.

The mistake also led to centuries of wild theories in biblical studies, Blumell said. Some argued the unnamed elect lady might be Mary, the mother of Jesus, or Martha, the sister of Lazarus and Mary.

One said it might be a love letter. Some even argued the letter was fictional.

“No,” Blumell said, “the Greek just got corrupted. I give dozens of examples of the same kind of error occurring in early Christian manuscripts or papyri, where two are duplicated letters get dropped.”

We can all see the parallel to today's situation in which Latter-day Saint scholars have (i) erased what Joseph and Oliver taught about the origin and setting of the Book of Mormon and (ii) developed "wild theories" about the origin and setting of the Book of Mormon. 

The explicit, unambiguous teachings of Joseph and Oliver are absent from the Gospel Topics Essays, the Church History Museum, the visitors centers (including at the Hill Cumorah itself!) and in the curriculum and media resources.

New and young Latter-day Saints never learn what Joseph and Oliver actually taught.

Some future historian will rediscover what Joseph and Oliver taught and announce the discovery with as much acclaim as this discovery about Electa.

Elders' Journal






Tuesday, November 4, 2025

"Flagrant violation of basic professional standards"

Recently I saw a description of the Gospel Topics Essay (GTE) on Book of Mormon Translation that described it as a "flagrant violation of basic professional standards."

It is difficult to disagree with that assessment. 

Here is the link: 

https://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/study/manual/gospel-topics-essays/book-of-mormon-translation?lang=eng

Anyone can read the GTE and see that it would receive a failing grade if submitted for grading in a basic History 101 class. 

It is not surprising that no historians are acknowledged by name as contributors. Instead, we read this statement at the end: "The Church acknowledges the contribution of scholars to the historical content presented in this article; their work is used with permission."

The reputation of any historian who is associated with this GTE would be severely damaged if he/she were named.

We can only speculate why it is so poorly written from an academic perspective, but we can offer suggestions for improvement going forward.

Fixing this GTE would be easy, if anyone cared enough to do it.  

An improved GTE would greatly enhance credibility and clarity for Latter-day Saints and their friends around the world.

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We previously discussed the AHA Historians' Standards of Professional Conduct on this blog. (AHA is the American Historical Association.)

https://www.ldshistoricalnarratives.com/p/aha-historians-standards-of.html

While the GTE violates several basic standards of professional conduct, here are some of the most obvious examples. Original language from the AHA in blue, my comments in red, third party quotations in green.

Professional integrity in the practice of history requires awareness of one’s own biases and a readiness to follow sound method and analysis wherever they may lead.

Throughout the GTE, the anonymous authors' bias against the teachings of Joseph Smith and Oliver Cowdery is evident. Their bias is to strongly promote the stone-in-the-hat theory (SITH) of translation, which rejects what Joseph and Oliver said.

That bias explains the failure to follow sound method and analysis, as we'll see below. A revised essay should overcome this bias by presenting and evaluating the relevant sources instead of misquoting and censoring them.

Historians should practice their craft with integrity. 

The term "integrity" is subjective and vague, but in this context this dictionary definition applies: INTEGRITY is firm adherence to a code of especially moral or artistic values. In the context of writing and publishing history, the AHA standards provide a code of conduct. Presumably every historian involved with writing the GTE has been trained to adhere to the AHA standards. For that reason, the "flagrant violation" of those standards is all the more disturbing.

They should honor the historical record. 

We can all see that the GTE not only does not honor the historical record, it selectively dishonors specifically the statements from Joseph Smith and Oliver Cowdery, along with those who corroborated what they said about the translation. No historian who adheres to the AHA standards would omit what the principals explained about the events in question. Yet the GTE studiously avoids what both Joseph and Oliver actually said about the translation.

They should document their sources.

A failure to document sources can be unintentional, but when the failure is deliberate--when the omission promotes a specific narrative--the failure is a blatant violation of the AHA standards.

For example, the GTE says "Joseph received the plates in September 1827" but does not provide a source. Because the GTE had previously cited Joseph Smith-History, an obvious citation would be verse 59, and the reader naturally wonders why that citation was omitted. 

But when we see the source, readers can reasonably infer that the reason no citation is given is because the source contradicts the narrative promoted by the GTE. Here is verse 59.

59 At length the time arrived for obtaining the plates, the Urim and Thummim, and the breastplate. On the twenty-second day of September, one thousand eight hundred and twenty-seven,

(Joseph Smith—History 1:59)

Contrary to the narrative in the GTE, Joseph did not merely say he received the plates. The plates were part of a package that included the Urim and Thummim and the breastplate. A proper citation to the source would have explained that obvious fact, but the GTE instead misleads readers.

The GTE appropriately documents some sources, but avoids documenting others that it purports to present to the reader. For example, the GTE says "Much can be known about the coming forth of the English text of the Book of Mormon through a careful study of statements made by Joseph Smith," but then it ignores most of Joseph's statements and omits relevant context from the few statements it does present.

Readers have no clue that the GTE is not only not offering a "careful study" of the few quotations it provides, but is also not even citing (let alone quoting) most of Joseph Smith's statements on the topic. 

Historians should not misrepresent their sources. 

The GTE misrepresents the few statements it provides from Joseph and Oliver by omitting the relevant context. Look at these examples.

1. The first paragraph includes three excerpts from Joseph Smith-History 1:33. Note 3 cites and quotes verses 33-34. But then, rather than quote or even cite verse 35, the GTE instead paraphrases that part of the narrative.

Notice the context omitted by the GTE:

35 Also, that there were two stones in silver bows—and these stones, fastened to a breastplate, constituted what is called the Urim and Thummim—deposited with the plates; and the possession and use of these stones were what constituted “seers” in ancient or former times; and that God had prepared them for the purpose of translating the book.

(Joseph Smith—History 1:35)

The omission of verse 35 becomes more significant later in the GTE when the GTE misrepresents what Joseph referred to as the Urim and Thummim.

2. The GTE says this:

Of his experience as scribe, Cowdery wrote, “These were days never to be forgotten—to sit under the sound of a voice dictated by the inspiration of heaven.”7

Note 7 says this:

Joseph Smith History, ca. summer 1832, in Joseph Smith Histories, 16; Oliver Cowdery to William W. Phelps, Sept. 7, 1834, in Messenger and Advocate 1 (Oct. 1834): 14; italics in original.

In this example, both the original quotation and the citation are "flagrant violations of basic professional standards."

The GTE truncated the quotation from Cowdery to omit his reference to the Urim and Thummim:

These were days never to be forgotten—to sit under the sound of a voice dictated by the inspiration of heaven, awakened the utmost gratitude of this bosom! Day after day I continued, uninterrupted, to write from his mouth, as he translated with the Urim and Thummim, or, as the Nephites would have said, ‘Interpreters,’ the history or record called ‘The Book of Mormon.’
(Joseph Smith—History, Note, 1)

By omitting Oliver's explanation of how Joseph translated, the GTE conveys the false impression that Joseph was merely reciting by inspiration instead of by translating.

Note 7 cites the Messenger and Advocate, an obscure reference that few people have access to, without noting that Cowdery's statement is also canonized in Joseph Smith-History as a note to verse 71. The AHA standard of documenting sources is flagrantly violated when historians cite an obscure source when an easily accessible one is readily available--especially when they already cited the easily accessible one in this very GTE.

3. The section of the GTE on "Translation Instruments" is full of "flagrant violations of basic professional standards." We've discussed those previously on this blog, such as here:


One of the most flagrant is this statement:

Joseph found the interpreters buried in the hill with the plates.16

The statement misrepresents the source because Joseph always said he found the Urim and Thummim with the plates. He did not say he found the "interpreters" there. 

The misleading paraphrase of Joseph's actual statements is hidden by the unhelpful citation in Note 16.

Michael Hubbard MacKay, Gerrit J. Dirkmaat, Grand Underwood, Robert J. Woodford, and William G. Hartley, eds., Documents, Volume 1: July 1828–June 1831, vol. 1 of the Documents series of The Joseph Smith Papers, edited by Dean C. Jessee, Ronald K. Esplin, Richard Lyman Bushman, and Matthew J. Grow (Salt Lake City: Church Historian’s Press, 2013), xxix. 

As we saw above, Joseph explained exactly what he found in the hill, right in Joseph Smith-History. But instead of providing that easily accessible reference (available in many languages as part of the scriptures), the GTE provides an obscure citation to a source few people would have access to. 

They should report their findings as accurately as possible and not omit evidence that runs counter to their own interpretation.

Among the obvious problems, the GTE studiously omits every statement by Joseph and Oliver regarding the Urim and Thummim. The obvious reason is that what Joseph and Oliver said directly "runs counter" to the narrative promoted by the GTE.

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The GTE is not broken beyond repair. The "flagrant violations" of basic professional standards could be easily fixed by simply reporting the actual historical record.

The authors of the GTE have demonstrated a determination to prefer decades-old statements by David Whitmer and Emma Bidamon over the specific, unambiguous statements of Joseph Smith and Oliver Cowdery. 

And that's fine, if that's what they want to do.

But they should do so explicitly by accurately informing readers what Joseph and Oliver actually said so that readers can make informed decisions about the way the GTE promotes the SITH agenda.

Friday, October 24, 2025

Making adjustments and improvements

The Church announced adjustments and improvements to the scripture study aids.

Minor Adjustments Made to Select Study Helps in Doctrine and Covenants, Book of Mormon

https://newsroom.churchofjesuschrist.org/article/minor-adjustments-to-select-study-helps-in-doctrine-and-covenants-and-book-of-mormon-announced

“These adjustments bring the section introductions in line with what we have learned from more than twenty years of careful study of Joseph Smith’s documents. The minor changes to dates and places reflect the careful attention with which we believe this remarkable legacy of divine revelation ought to be treated,” Elder Kyle S. McKay, General Authority Seventy and Church Historian, said. “We hope the contextual additions help readers better understand why and how the Lord communicated with the Church through His Prophet.”

It is wonderful to see such adjustments, improvements and clarifications.

This is good precedent for making similar improvements to correct errors in the commentary in: 

- the Joseph Smith Papers

- the Gospel Topics Essays

- the Saints books

- curriculum, and 

- Church websites.

We have noted many such improvements on this blog.

The announcement explains how the adjustments are being rolled out:

The adjustments are available now on ChurchofJesusChrist.org and the Gospel Library

mobile app for most languages, with additional languages to follow.

Printed copies will begin reflecting these adjustments in the coming months.

Members are not expected to obtain new scriptures as a result of these updates.

This is the model that could (and should) be followed to make adjustments, improvements and corrections.

Let's hope that happens!



Friday, October 17, 2025

High agency and fixing problems

This graph illustrates what we try to do on this blog. It depicts "high agency" employees.

Because we're independent, we obviously cannot fix the problems we identify.

Only the Church History and other departments can do that.

But we do offer possible solutions to the problems we identify and then make specific recommendations to correct and/or improve the content.

(click to enlarge)

It says there are 5 levels of work:

Level 1: “There is a problem.”

Level 2: “There is a problem, and I’ve found some causes.”

Level 3: “Here’s the problem, here are some possible causes, and here are some possible solutions.”

Level 4: “Here’s the problem, here’s what I think caused it, here are some possible solutions, and here’s the one I think we should pick.”

Level 5: “I identified a problem, figured out what caused it, researched how to fix it, and I fixed it. Just wanted to keep you in the loop.”




Saturday, October 4, 2025

Improving the Moroni-Cumorah narrative

This is an excellent reference that could be improved with some additional material from authentic historical sources.

https://history.churchofjesuschrist.org/content/moroni-messenger-of-the-restoration?lang=eng

Original in blue, my suggestions in red.

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Moroni: Messenger of the Restoration

Introduction

On the night of September 21, 1823, Joseph Smith prayed to know God’s further will toward him. 

Steadily a light grew “as though the house was filled with consuming and unquenchable fire.”1 

Replace the sentence with this: Oliver Cowdery wrote that, "to use his [Joseph's] own description, the first sight was as though the house was filled with consuming and unquenchable fire."

1. Letter from Oliver Cowdery to William W. Phelps, Feb. 1835, Kirtland, Ohio, published in Messenger and Advocate, Feb. 1835, 79.

1. Add the following link to the footnote: https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/history-1834-1836/67

Moroni, a messenger sent from God, stood before him. In mortal life Moroni had been the last of ancient American prophets having authority2 from God and whose teachings were recorded for our time.

2. “The permission granted to men on earth called or ordained to act for and in behalf of God the Father or Jesus Christ in doing God’s work” (Guide to the Scriptures, “Authority,” scriptures.ChurchofJesusChrist.org)

No suggestions.

Moroni declared “that the time was at hand for the Gospel3 in all its fullness to be preached in power, unto all nations” and that Joseph was “to be an instrument in the hands of God” in that work.4 

3. “God’s plan of salvation, made possible through the Atonement of Jesus Christ. The gospel includes the eternal truths or laws, covenants, and ordinances needed for mankind to enter back into the presence of God. God restored the fulness of the gospel to the earth in the 19th century through the Prophet Joseph Smith” (Guide to the Scriptures, “Gospel,” scriptures.ChurchofJesusChrist.org).

4. History of the Church, 4:537.

4. Replace HC reference with JSP: "Church History," aka the "Wentworth letter," https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/church-history-1-march-1842/2 

He quoted ancient prophets who had foreseen that this time would come. As Moroni stood before him, Joseph was shown in vision “the place where the plates were deposited” (Joseph Smith—History 1:42).

He quoted ancient prophets who had foreseen that this time would come. Moroni explained that "a history of the aborigines of this country... was written and deposited not far from" Joseph's home, and that "the record is on a side hill on the Hill of Cumorah 3 miles from this place." 5 As Moroni stood before him, Joseph was shown in vision “the place where the plates were deposited” (Joseph Smith—History 1:42).

5. See https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/history-1834-1836/68 and https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/lucy-mack-smith-history-1844-1845/41.

Every September for four years, Joseph went to the Hill Cumorah and was taught by Moroni. In September 1827 Joseph met Moroni at the hill and received the gold plates. Twenty-one months later, having completed the translation, Joseph returned the plates to Moroni.5

Every September for three years, Joseph went to the Hill Cumorah and was taught by Moroni. In early 1827, Joseph came home late from Manchester and explained to his concerned parents that "as I passed by the hill of Cumorah, where the plates are, the angel of the Lord met me and said, that I had not been engaged enough in the work of the Lord; that the time had come for the record to ​be​ brought forth."6 In September 1827 Joseph met Moroni at the hill and received the gold plates. When he finished the translation, Joseph returned the plates to Moroni.7

5. See History of the Church, 1:13.

6. https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/lucy-mack-smith-history-1845/111

7. Because the cited reference in note 5 does not say what the narrative claims, it is better to cite JS-H 1:60

Quotes

Joseph Smith Quotes

“This messenger [Moroni] proclaimed himself to be an angel of God, sent to bring the joyful tidings that the covenant which God made with ancient Israel was at hand to be fulfilled, that the preparatory work for the second coming of the Messiah was speedily to commence; that the time was at hand for the Gospel in all its fullness to be preached in power, unto all nations that a people might be prepared for the Millennial reign. I was informed that I was chosen to be an instrument in the hands of God to bring about some of His purposes in this glorious dispensation” (History of the Church, 4:536–37).

Replace reference with JSP

“Let us take the Book of Mormon, which a man took and hid in his field, securing it by his faith, to spring up in the last days, or in due time; let us behold it coming forth out of the ground, which is indeed accounted the least of all seeds, but behold it branching forth, yea, even towering, with lofty branches, and God-like majesty, until it, like the mustard seed, becomes the greatest of all herbs. And it is truth, and it has sprouted and come forth out of the earth, and righteousness begins to look down from heaven, and God is sending down His powers, gifts and angels, to lodge in the branches thereof” (Teachings of the Prophet Joseph Smith, sel. Joseph Fielding Smith (1976), 98).

Replace reference with JSP

Witnesses

Joseph Knight, Early Member of the Church 

“[In] the forepart of September [1827,] I went to Rochester on business and returned by Palmyra to be there about the 22nd of September. . . . That night we all went to bed and in the morning I got up and my horse and carriage were gone. . . . After a while he [Joseph Smith] came home [with] the horse. All came into the house to breakfast. But no thing [was] said about where they had been. After breakfast Joseph called me into the other room. . . . He set his foot on the bed and leaned his head on his hand and said, . . . ‘It is ten times better than I expected.’ Then he went on to tell the length and width and thickness of the plates, and said he, ‘They appear to be gold’” (Reminiscenses of Joseph Knight, Church History Library, Salt Lake City; spelling, grammar, and capitalization standardized. This manuscript, written between 1833 and 1847, has been published in Dean C. Jessee, “Joseph Knight’s Recollection of Early Mormon History,” BYU Studies, vol. 17, no. 1 [Fall 1976], 30–39).


John A. Widtsoe, Apostle, 1921–1952 

“The first visitation of Moroni came in answer to prayer. So came the First Vision. The Lord is ready to give, but he requires that his children ask. It would not be natural or wise to force blessings on anyone. The power of prayer is inestimable. One prays for little; usually much comes in answer. . . . The most marvelous part of the message to the young man, lying upon his wakeful pillow, was that he, Joseph Smith, was the chosen instrument in the hands of the Lord to inaugurate the great work planned for the last days of the world. It was astonishing! It was wonderful!” (Joseph Smith: Seeker after Truth, Prophet of God [1951], 32–33; paragraph divisions altered).


Questions

How many times did Moroni visit the Prophet Joseph?

There is no record of the exact number of visits from Moroni, but 22 have been documented (see H. Donl Peterson, “Moroni—Joseph Smith’s Tutor,” Ensign, Jan. 1992, 22–29).


What did Joseph Smith learn in his visits with Moroni?

Moroni taught Joseph Smith from scripture, quoting Malachi, Isaiah, Joel, and Acts. John Taylor explained: “Joseph Smith in the first place was set apart by the Almighty according to the [councils] of the Gods in the eternal worlds, to introduce the principles of life among the people. . . . The principles which he had, placed him in communication with . . . Abraham, Isaac, Jacob, Noah, Adam, Seth, Enoch, and Jesus and the Father and the apostles that lived on this continent as well as those who lived on the Asiatic continent. . . . Why? Because he had to introduce a dispensation which was called the dispensation of the fulness of times, and it was known as such by the ancient servants of God” (Deseret News, June 9, 1880, 280).


What did Moroni teach Joseph Smith about the ancient Americans?

Joseph also learned about the ancient inhabitants of the Americas, “who they were, and from whence they came; a brief sketch of their origin, progress, civilization, laws, governments, of their righteousness and iniquity, and the blessings of God being finally withdrawn from them as a people” (History of the Church, 4:537).

Replace reference with JSP

Readings

Online Resources at ChurchofJesusChrist.org

Moroni 8:16


A Period of Preparation, 1823–29”—Church History in the Fulness of Times Student Manual (Church Educational System manual, 2003), 37–51


Many Angels Visited Joseph Smith”—in “Joseph Smith: First President of the Church,” Presidents of the Church Student Manual (Church Educational System manual, 2004), 7


Joseph Told His Father about Moroni’s Visit”—in “Joseph Smith: First President of the Church,” Presidents of the Church Student Manual (Church Educational System manual, 2004), 7


Coming Forth of the Book of Mormon”—in “Establishing the Foundations of the Church,” Our Heritage: A Brief History of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (1996), 5–11

Online Resources at the Joseph Smith Papers

https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/history-1834-1836/68

https://www.josephsmithpapers.org/paper-summary/lucy-mack-smith-history-1845/111

Online Resources at BYU

“Katharine Smith Salisbury’s Recollections of Joseph’s Meetings with Moroni”—Kyle R. Walker, BYU Studies, vol. 41, no. 3 (2002), 4–17


Newspaper report of speech given by Joseph Smith’s younger sister.

Corroborating Joseph’s production of D&C 132

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